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Mountain Dew · June 16th, 2014, 12:17 AM

First concern is the profile of the buildings. I can't see the exif data, but I'm assuming it's your 35mm? You edit in iphoto you said right? Not sure what it's called in there, but in Lightoom it's called profile correction. See if you can find that and either let it do auto, or do it yourself to get the buildings upright and not falling back and not squeezed in. Horizon also seems a hair crooked.

Second is the boat in the bottom. Either crop it out or crop it in. My suggestion would be in if you can, since there'd be three boats. Rule of threes/odds. Oh and the flag is cut off. Is this a crop or was that all you could do with the framing in camera?

It just seems too blue or too saturated. Maybe mess with the white balance? Or go a little less on the saturation slider?

Clouds look alright to me. But there is some haloing around the buildings.

Not too sure what the focus of the photo is supposed to be. The trees do make an implied line, but to where?

June 16th, 2014, 12:17 AM	#107
Mountain Dew Ambrosia. Name: Jaymie Location: Oahu, Hawaii Join Date: Aug 2011 Motorcycle(s): 1974 Honda CB550K0 W.I.P. Posts: A lot.	First concern is the profile of the buildings. I can't see the exif data, but I'm assuming it's your 35mm? You edit in iphoto you said right? Not sure what it's called in there, but in Lightoom it's called profile correction. See if you can find that and either let it do auto, or do it yourself to get the buildings upright and not falling back and not squeezed in. Horizon also seems a hair crooked. Second is the boat in the bottom. Either crop it out or crop it in. My suggestion would be in if you can, since there'd be three boats. Rule of threes/odds. Oh and the flag is cut off. Is this a crop or was that all you could do with the framing in camera? It just seems too blue or too saturated. Maybe mess with the white balance? Or go a little less on the saturation slider? Clouds look alright to me. But there is some haloing around the buildings. Not too sure what the focus of the photo is supposed to be. The trees do make an implied line, but to where? __________________________________________________ Life's better on the Mountain.