Alex,
I did another set and need to add some new tips. Can you add these edits.
After "The bottom part off the cartridge is bolted to the outer fork in the same manner as the damper rod."
Use something to hold the cartridge in the center of the outer fork opening.
After "Pour the oil into the forks"
If possible, use a funnel to pour the oil directly into the cartridge tube. This make bleeding the air much much easier.
After "After the oil level is set, insert the springs, plastic preload adjuster and screw on the top cap."
Make sure the compression/rebound screw is all the way out. You don't want the needle bottom out as you are screwing on the cap.